tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post7066549474194914884..comments2023-05-21T08:10:37.321-07:00Comments on TWISTED CHILLIES: Time to act God (short story)Forked Tonguehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09270739333461437413noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post-41917024759827637572013-06-02T19:54:47.556-07:002013-06-02T19:54:47.556-07:00This is good. Could do with some cleaning up but o...This is good. Could do with some cleaning up but overall its good.Soulz Rebelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17657461302745155858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post-48680480253151230732013-05-15T08:51:38.143-07:002013-05-15T08:51:38.143-07:00Aye aye captain ! :DAye aye captain ! :DForked Tonguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09270739333461437413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post-69409052892539389842013-05-15T04:48:08.687-07:002013-05-15T04:48:08.687-07:00Good one Boss! but like the previous comment, use ...Good one Boss! but like the previous comment, use lesser images and also spell check. Red Handedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17062645716811851771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post-11777193288805746632013-05-15T03:06:32.062-07:002013-05-15T03:06:32.062-07:00i though it would invite more readers :Pi though it would invite more readers :PForked Tonguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09270739333461437413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8630853167809060163.post-18139959601706949422013-05-14T08:37:45.166-07:002013-05-14T08:37:45.166-07:00a suggestion would be to put up less pics and let ...a suggestion would be to put up less pics and let your words tell the story. and yes, your words are more than enough :)huzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236749659017059577noreply@blogger.com